Translating T. S. Eliot: an exercise of paraphrase

This article takes a T. S. Eliot’s poem, “Eyes that last I saw in tears”, as a translating exercise. The poem has a complex rhythmic structure and a complex system of phonetic repetitions. The reproduction of those effects in a translation demands more from the translator’s efforts to paraphrase the...

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Autor: Kangussu, André Mendes
Formato: artículo
Estado:Versión publicada
Fecha de publicación:2019
País:Brasil
Recursos:Universidade Presbiteriana Mackenzie (UPM)
Repositorio:Cadernos de pós graduação em letras (Online)
Idioma:portugués
OAI Identifier:oai:ojs.editorarevistas.mackenzie.br:article/12826
Acesso em linha:https://editorarevistas.mackenzie.br/index.php/cpgl/article/view/12826
Access Level:acceso abierto
Palavra-chave:Tradução
Tradução poética
Poesia inglesa
Translation
Poetic translation
English poetry
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Resumo:This article takes a T. S. Eliot’s poem, “Eyes that last I saw in tears”, as a translating exercise. The poem has a complex rhythmic structure and a complex system of phonetic repetitions. The reproduction of those effects in a translation demands more from the translator’s efforts to paraphrase the original, that is, to retell it in other words. Our main goal is to give visibility to the multiplicity of ways of re-elaborating the poetry in the original. We start by commenting the poem and the author’s poetics. After this we present a table that suggests a variety of sentences and words to paraphrase each verse, and, finally, we propose six translations that were based on this table.